You and me
Together
Make us
Our thoughts
Tumbled together
Collectively thus
Making sense
Our love entwined
Fashioning our children
Their eyes reflecting
Us
Your heart
And mine
Together
Make us
This is my attemp at poetry, hope you enjoyed it, now go on over to Arlee @tossing it out and have a great day ya'll.
“I am only one, but I am one. I cannot do everything, but I can do something. What I can do, I should do and With the help of God, I will do." ~Everette Hale
15 comments:
I think your poem was very good.
Thanks for sharing it,
Yvonne,
Hey Shannon - what a great poem! I really like the simplicity of it! :)
That's a great poem!
Maybe your a poet and didn't know it?
Nice poem, says it all without becoming bogged down in a lot of words.
Good job! How is the visit going with those VIPs that dropped by?
Nice, Shannon!
This a good one Shannon.
Hi Shannon,
I really enjoyed it! Great U post~
Adorable poem! I loved it!
Ruby
you certainly said a lot in those few words. well done, Shannon:)
I like your poetry! Well done.
Yes, we need each other.
Faith, hope & love.
Sorry I haven't been visiting regularly. I have been busy and it is getting more difficult to find time to reply. Just know I am here. Reading...Praying...Enjoying all you have to share. Thanks!
I really enjoyed this poem.
It was more than attempt, it was poetry. Very pretty picture painted!
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