Saturday, April 24, 2010

U is for...Us

Us
You and me
Together
Make us

Our thoughts
Tumbled together
Collectively thus

Making sense

Our love entwined
Fashioning our children
Their eyes reflecting
Us

Your heart
And mine
Together
Make us

This is my attemp at poetry, hope you enjoyed it, now go on over to Arlee @tossing it out and have a great day ya'll. 

“I am only one, but I am one. I cannot do everything, but I can do something. What I can do, I should do and With the help of God, I will do." ~Everette Hale

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15 comments:

WELCOME TO MY WORLD OF POETRY: said...

I think your poem was very good.
Thanks for sharing it,

Yvonne,

Lisa said...

Hey Shannon - what a great poem! I really like the simplicity of it! :)

THE OLD GEEZER said...

That's a great poem!

Maybe your a poet and didn't know it?

Dragons Muse said...

Nice poem, says it all without becoming bogged down in a lot of words.

Gregg said...

Good job! How is the visit going with those VIPs that dropped by?

Alex J. Cavanaugh said...

Nice, Shannon!

Wanda said...

This a good one Shannon.

Ellie said...

Hi Shannon,
I really enjoyed it! Great U post~

Grammy said...

Adorable poem! I loved it!
Ruby

Bud Ezekiel H. said...

you certainly said a lot in those few words. well done, Shannon:)

Linda said...

I like your poetry! Well done.

BLUEBUTTERFLY said...

Yes, we need each other.

Faith, hope & love.

Rae said...

Sorry I haven't been visiting regularly. I have been busy and it is getting more difficult to find time to reply. Just know I am here. Reading...Praying...Enjoying all you have to share. Thanks!

melodygreen said...

I really enjoyed this poem.

Terra said...

It was more than attempt, it was poetry. Very pretty picture painted!

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